why is this sentence incorrect?

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why is this sentence incorrect?

Post by quchangtju » Mon Sep 09, 2019 2:33 pm

Not far from the club there was a garden, its owner seated in it playing bridge with his children every afternoon.
the part of "its owner seated in it playing bridge with his children every afternoon " is a absolute construction,is it right?

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Re: why is this sentence incorrect?

Post by Alan » Thu Sep 12, 2019 8:54 am

Yes.

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