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complex paragraph

Post by Pacifist » Tue Nov 03, 2020 10:12 pm

Is this paragraph correct:



"Laika had no easy life.
She lived adrift on the streets of Moscow, without the protection of a human being to whom all of her kind paid their loyalty and recognized them as their masters"

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Re: complex paragraph

Post by Alan » Wed Nov 04, 2020 3:26 am

--> "She lived adrift on the streets of Moscow, without the protection of a human being to whom all of her kind gave their loyalty and whom they recognized as their master."

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