Is this paragraph correct:
"Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monotorized from Earth, and completed at least four laps around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth lap onwards."
paragraph
Moderator: Alan
-
Alan
- Teacher/Moderator
- Posts: 13746
- Joined: Mon Dec 29, 2003 7:56 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
Re: paragraph
Through sensors surgically implanted in her body, Laika was monitored from Earth, and completed at least four orbits around the Earth while still alive, her cardiac and breathing rate having stopped being detected from the fifth orbit onwards."