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Flash fiction

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2021 7:37 am
by Dina Anugrahani
I'm learning to compose a flash fiction. It's limited to 50 words. I was wondering if you can help me to check it, whether there are some mistakes; or perhaps you have any suggestions for my words choice.

As I got a flat tire, I lolloped wobblingly a lonesome road in the night. Gratefully, the journey ended up at a small tire shop.
The repairman fixed my flat tire painstakingly and skillfully; synchronously, he unveiled the noble role of the frequently underestimated job: Saving riders from their plights.