rejoicing at/enjoying

[PinkLady]

1. Are these sentences correct?



a) "While I was riding my bicycle, I felt almost like a bird, rejoicing greatly at the breeze on my face."



b) "While I was riding my bicycle, I felt almost like a bird, enjoying greatly the breeze on my face."




2. In case both are correct, which one sounds better?




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Thank you.

[Josef Essberger]

Both are possible or “correct”.

In the first, “greatly” seems redundant to me.