syntactic options
Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:18 pm
Tell me please which of the three structures is to be preferred in writing?
1. "I can't see what my chances of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much are." [This seems to be the correct one but it's barely understandable without re-reading it several times.]
2. "I can't see what are my chances of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much." [This seems better but is less correct grammatically.]
3. "I can't see what my chances are of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much." [same as (2)]
1. "I can't see what my chances of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much are." [This seems to be the correct one but it's barely understandable without re-reading it several times.]
2. "I can't see what are my chances of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much." [This seems better but is less correct grammatically.]
3. "I can't see what my chances are of winning the big prize all my closest friends desired so much." [same as (2)]