How Can I Know?

[Ali Al-Majnooni]

Hi People,
Here is a poem I have written some months ago. I wanted to share it with you. I hope you will admire it.
Tell me what you think, please.

HOW CAN I KNOW?

Hark to bright stars of eve
That capture your sight while you recline
No sound would you perceive
From sleeping creatures, except for mine,
My call for you,
And for love, too!

While we are set apart
Whenever you hear my name spoken,
Put your hand on your heart.
If you feel that your pulse hurries then
I do the same
Hearing your name!

From your smile at my face
That you love me I could not extract.
But when tears leave their place
They would reveal me the happy fact.
Then I could see
That you love me!

Always I used to keep
Thinking of you dreaming my time out.
So you within your sleep
Make me the one whom you dream about.
And if not so,
How can I know?

[mandy]

this poem is just...........amazing.
thank u....
keep posting..
& i'll keep reading...

[Ali Al-Majnooni]

Hi.
Thank you, dear Mandy, for your reply. It really made me glad that SOMEONE liked my poem. With your support we can continue.
Thanks Again.

[chemist]

:) it's really great ,I loved it's deep meaning, and honest feelings.
So go on.


Salam

[Ali Al-Majnooni]

it's really great ,I loved it's deep meaning, and honest feelings.
So go on.

Thank you, Chemist, for your promoting reply. It is my pleasure to have such a reader.

[mr_Love]

it is nice

just keep writing as my friend says


ok

good luck