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Love you because...

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Love you because...

Postby trannie_nguyen » Sun Mar 20, 2005 3:58 am

Love you because …
You make me feel I’m me
You make me feel I’m free
You make me feel I’m like a tree
Which is I stay forever in one place
Which is I’ll never be gone away from you

The way you take me to your heart
Is the way I want to share my emotion to you
The way you feel is the way I feel
I lose and gain love is when you gain and lose
The distance you give, I will never forget

The day you tell me I should forget you
Is the day I will tear apart
The day you walk away I never forget
The chance I tell you that I love you
Is still inside me, in my soul

Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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Re: Love you because...

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:54 pm

Nice poem!
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



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Re: Love you because...

Postby Sunnypk » Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:17 pm

umm... Very good I like it

keep it up!
As you so, so shall you reap
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Re: Love you because...

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 22, 2008 9:34 am

"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"


my favourit part :D
thanks to share us ur poem


cheeeeeeeeeers
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Re: Love you because...

Postby denvinbo » Sun Mar 23, 2008 9:24 am

You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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Re: Love you because...

Postby Krisi » Sun Mar 23, 2008 11:05 am

denvinbo wrote:You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?


Why is your mind tainted with that? Don't mind so much of what's going on around, purify your mind please...
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



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Re: Love you because...

Postby shakespear » Sun Mar 23, 2008 11:58 am

Hi,
"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"
I think these lines are fantastic
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Love you because...

Postby gentle » Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:36 am

oh,so lovely words I liked them so much
thankssssssssssssssssssss
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