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A poem about grammar.

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A poem about grammar.

Postby Khokha » Wed May 02, 2007 1:29 pm

Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!

please! don't Laugh becuase it was the first time for me to write a poem.

Here ir the poem:


How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class


Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him


Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful


Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy


Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?


Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book
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Postby Khokha » Sat May 05, 2007 7:06 pm

Hi guys, are you joking? Where are you comments? Don't kill the poet inside me!
Common...encourage, compliment, or write anything!
Waiting 4 u :roll:
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Re: A poem about grammar.

Postby imad » Sun May 06, 2007 5:34 pm

Khokha wrote:please! don't Laugh becuase it was the first time for me to write a poem.

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why should I laugh? for me it's a good poem, I can't write a poem like this cause I miss experience.

good work Khokha :wink:
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Postby Khokha » Mon May 07, 2007 7:43 pm

Hello imad,

Actually, I always laugh when I read the poem. I can't believe that I wrote it. I feel the innocence between the words and it seems that it's a child's writing. I think you and every body can write poems, but you have to try first.
Thank you for your comment and good luck gold member :) .
Last edited by Khokha on Sun May 13, 2007 2:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby fortminor » Tue May 08, 2007 11:10 am

its cool , but i don't like the style
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Postby Khokha » Mon May 14, 2007 11:12 am

Thank you fortminor. I did not anderstand what do you mean by this style.
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Postby InLove » Thu May 24, 2007 9:49 am

Unsuitable and non-style..
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Postby Vega » Sun May 27, 2007 3:49 pm

It seems like it was taken from Hip-Hop. I don't think that there's no style in that poem, I suppose it is a freestyle.
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Postby Khokha » Sun May 27, 2007 5:51 pm

Thank you InLove
It's ok kind Xkalibur.. thank you
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Postby Bassam » Sun May 27, 2007 8:01 pm

HI khokha,,
i think u will be a mini-shakespeare poet :lol:

whatever it is sooo cool, fantastic, English lovely, and beautiful poem :oops:
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