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A ROSE & A HELL

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:22 pm

hello shakespear...i want to thank you very much because you review my lines and finally i could issue these lines....thank you because you did me this favor..my lines:

you broke my stem...it's unfair
we're happy couple, we're sweet pair
how long do i have to wait?
you know you are my soul's mate...

i hope i can write another lines...of course with the help of my friends..
we have to live our life freely
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:57 am

Hi farah.... U r welcome
I look 4ward to hearing from u... I'll help u... Its my pleasure 2 help u
Go ahead & lets read ur other lines
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Fri May 02, 2014 8:37 pm

shakespear wrote:Go ahead & lets read ur other lines


really I have problem with the topic of the poem which I want to write... If you help me may be I can start my poem
THANKS LOTS SHAKESPEAR
SEE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOON
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Fri May 02, 2014 9:04 pm

farah wrote:really I have problem with the topic of the poem which I want to write... If you help me may be I can start my poem

ok listen farah...we start days b4 a game to start with a word or a line which determine the topic and we begin to compose about it...and u can review the comments i with dreamer...i think u r online now...so y don't u start with :
do i only feel sad ?
have nice moments...
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Fri May 02, 2014 9:43 pm

shakespear wrote:do i only feel sad ?


mmm ok so you want me to start with this line, right???
ok let me start:
Do I only feel sad?
Or all the world with me?
Are you also sad?
If not, you are bad.

hahahah... so what do you think about this poem??
I think it's so lovely game
I'm waiting your comment............
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Sat May 03, 2014 2:33 pm

Sorry net was cut... Really i think u start writing lines ...u can complete it with many lines but be careful with grammar& dictation& meaning
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Mon May 05, 2014 8:19 am

if ur online just start ur lines
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Mon May 05, 2014 9:16 am

Wt u wana me start with? Choose any thing.. U know my ability.. Ok?
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue May 06, 2014 11:55 am

i mean let's play our game
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue May 06, 2014 12:42 pm

Ok.... But really if u try a poem it'll be better... Ok :
Will you really go far away?
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