A poem about grammar.
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A poem about grammar.
Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!
please! don't Laugh becuase it was the first time for me to write a poem.
Here ir the poem:
How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class
Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him
Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful
Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy
Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?
Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
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One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!
please! don't Laugh becuase it was the first time for me to write a poem.
Here ir the poem:
How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class
Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him
Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful
Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy
Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?
Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book
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Re: A poem about grammar.
why should I laugh? for me it's a good poem, I can't write a poem like this cause I miss experience.Khokha wrote: please! don't Laugh becuase it was the first time for me to write a poem.
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good work Khokha
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Hello imad,
Actually, I always laugh when I read the poem. I can't believe that I wrote it. I feel the innocence between the words and it seems that it's a child's writing. I think you and every body can write poems, but you have to try first.
Thank you for your comment and good luck gold member :) .
Actually, I always laugh when I read the poem. I can't believe that I wrote it. I feel the innocence between the words and it seems that it's a child's writing. I think you and every body can write poems, but you have to try first.
Thank you for your comment and good luck gold member :) .
Last edited by Khokha on Sun May 13, 2007 2:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Hi all, i am not a Gold member as well as a Silver member. However, i do hope i can join with every members in this website to write, to learn, and to know one another. I love poems very much, but i can write a poem in my native language only. What luck to me to know this great poem by Khokha. Thanks.
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A poem about grammar.
What is lovely poem from lovely person and ur name is so interesting Khokha I like it . I like ur style I felt like soul of child in ur when u said these words .
By the way I read ur comment for mates I like the way u comment
Best wishes to u
Am looking for new from u
maksoor aikatter
What is lovely poem from lovely person and ur name is so interesting Khokha I like it . I like ur style I felt like soul of child in ur when u said these words .
By the way I read ur comment for mates I like the way u comment
Best wishes to u
Am looking for new from u
maksoor aikatter
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Khokha, not to be put off by someone saying anything negative just cus someone is so discouraging and critical. (Of course they could if they themselves are professional poets/poetesses. But poets/esses don't critize others poems because they all know very well that poems are after all poems). Besides, aren't we composing them only for fun? Keep going Khokha, it's a wonderful and funny poem, or if it's not considered a poem, it's a fantasitic writing. Anyway, I like it. Give yourself 5 gold star stickers(it's the max number) which I often do to my son when he reaches his goal and he sticks them on the calender. Weeeeeell done :!:
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Re: A poem about grammar.
Is it true that these were the first poems you've done... hmm, I think you've composed a lot before these...Khokha wrote:Hi All,
One day in my grammar class, the instructor asked as to write poems about grammar. Actually, it was an assignment and at the same time a competition. I wrote a simple poem and it was like a conversation between me and other classmates. I want to you to share your opinion with me, please!
please! don't Laugh because it was the first time for me to write a poem.
Here ir the poem:
How happy I am!
When I attend the class
And how sad I am!
When I miss my class
Class? Class? Which class you mean?
Don't you know what I mean?
Class of grammar I mean
What can a student call him?
I've never seen like him
Him? Him? Who is him?
Sir, Doctor, you choose anything
Rayn, Robert, he accepts every thing
The lessons of grammar are useful
But we have to be careful
Really? Really? Do you mean that?
Yes, yes it's not easy,
But some chapters are maybe
Please! Don't think we are lazy
Cause we are going to be crazy
Crazy? Crazy? Why crazy?
Sometimes we sleep in the class
To keep attention we need a glass
We enjoy answering the question
But why reasons must be mentioned?
Oh student, how poor you are!
I think "Good Grammar" is a useful book
Answers are written at the end of the book
Look! Look! Please take a look!
To our most amazing book
These are all wonderful! :)