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GOOD BYE

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
our life is like a night mare
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby allison » Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……


Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby CybaSumo » Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am

nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing! :prof:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm

Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am

hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby nxswxxg » Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm

nice words,but i don't understand others said :cry: :cry: :cry:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am

hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby farah » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am

i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
we have to live our life freely
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……



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