illusion
Your hair is the black night of the lovers
Your face is the shinning moon in that night
I sit silently , look at you for hours
Interested in you, in that sweet sight
Your eyes are green garden full of roses
Your rosy cheeks have two forbidden apples
Your lips are made of sweet red berries
Show me white pearls as they show smiles
You ‘re soft like the wings of a butterfly
You’re soft like the ray of the drowsy dawn
You’re soft like a blue sky in which I fly
You’re soft like a dew- drops of that fresh lawn
You are my eyes by which I see your charm
You’re my ears by which I hear a nice song
You’re my pleasure from God to forget your harm
You’re my heart beating fast, forgive your wrong
No food, no drink, no breath, but I need you
I can’t live without you, you are my life
I need you closely, who is like me, who?
You’ve hurt me, in my heart you’ve stabbed your knife
You’ve stolen my heart and let me alone
My queen, Have your slave! But give him a dose
Day and night, I always see you and moan
I’m afraid I lose my lovely red rose
I wrote this poem but you inspired me to write this poem so you gave me this favor. you remembered that these words had been mentioned in our chat, please accept my kisses habeeby.
good luck
illusion
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Re: illusion
to my best freind
this time u wrote a charming lovely poem
and be sure u'll not that red rose
ur so senstive
this is
my frist comment wait for my deep omment
cu and well done
this time u wrote a charming lovely poem
and be sure u'll not that red rose
ur so senstive
this is
my frist comment wait for my deep omment
cu and well done
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Re: illusion
Nice poem i liked so much u are great!
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Re: illusion
hola
well i read it agine but i did not find anything to talk about it's perfect and complete full of lovely senses and great emontions ur so great and glade to be freind to u
well i read it agine but i did not find anything to talk about it's perfect and complete full of lovely senses and great emontions ur so great and glade to be freind to u
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Re: illusion
thnx for all friends who comment on my poem and i'm very happy to have friends like u
good luck and i pray god help u and me.
thnx thnx thnx thnx
c u
good luck and i pray god help u and me.
thnx thnx thnx thnx
c u
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Re: illusion
Hi
I didnot remember these words so who u meant habeeby?
I didnot remember these words so who u meant habeeby?
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Re: illusion
hello
its not 4u
c u later
its not 4u
c u later
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Re: illusion
Hello
Nice to be your friend
Best wishes
Nice to be your friend
Best wishes
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Re: illusion
its my pleasure
thnx
have nice moments and gd lk
thnx
have nice moments and gd lk
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Re: illusion
Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
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Re: illusion
hello
plz send me ur pic to describe u poetically and paint ur face
thnx
c u
plz send me ur pic to describe u poetically and paint ur face
thnx
c u
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Re: illusion
how nice it is but are there
men like this nowadays?in fact i dont think so?
in general,u r a great poet,and i really interest and feel each poem of u
keep it up
men like this nowadays?in fact i dont think so?
in general,u r a great poet,and i really interest and feel each poem of u
keep it up
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Re: illusion
thnx and i like to know u much my friend and hope we can meet much in future
have nice moments
have nice moments
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Re: illusion
i think there r like those loyal menmanar wrote:how nice it is but are there
men like this nowadays?in fact i dont think so?
in general,u r a great poet,and i really interest and feel each poem of u
keep it up
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Re: illusion
hi
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Re: illusion
Good one :) Shakespear..u have had nice moments :D u are great
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Re: illusion
thnx friend
you too
you too
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hi my friends
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