Ode from inside a jail
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Ode from inside a jail
Ode from inside a jail
How could I live in that miserable jail?
Bad food, bad drink and even the smell was bad.
Criminals, robbers, perverts . .were all pale
All seemed tired or miserable or sad.
……………………………………………………………….
I used to look into your dreamy eyes,
Look at the sky to see the shinning moon,
To see radiant stars, in large or small size.
Thence I wondered, “ Can I see your eyes soon?” ……………………………………………………………….
Your phantom’s coming to me every time,
Stand by me, I wished to hug ‘t tightly.
On the walls of the jail, I carved my rhyme,
By that dim lamp, I could see it slightly.
……………………………………………………………….
Drops of my blood flowed on the jail’s ground.
A needle incised your name on my tired chest.
I had shouted at the top of my sound,
“ Like you, where can I find? In east or west?
……………………………………………………………….
On the walls, there is a motto “ Oh brother . .
Read my kind advice! To you I’m loyal . .
No doubt, every flower will soon wither
But the sweet memory will stay immortal.
Have nice time
How could I live in that miserable jail?
Bad food, bad drink and even the smell was bad.
Criminals, robbers, perverts . .were all pale
All seemed tired or miserable or sad.
……………………………………………………………….
I used to look into your dreamy eyes,
Look at the sky to see the shinning moon,
To see radiant stars, in large or small size.
Thence I wondered, “ Can I see your eyes soon?” ……………………………………………………………….
Your phantom’s coming to me every time,
Stand by me, I wished to hug ‘t tightly.
On the walls of the jail, I carved my rhyme,
By that dim lamp, I could see it slightly.
……………………………………………………………….
Drops of my blood flowed on the jail’s ground.
A needle incised your name on my tired chest.
I had shouted at the top of my sound,
“ Like you, where can I find? In east or west?
……………………………………………………………….
On the walls, there is a motto “ Oh brother . .
Read my kind advice! To you I’m loyal . .
No doubt, every flower will soon wither
But the sweet memory will stay immortal.
Have nice time
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How could I live in that miserable jail?
Bad food, bad drink and even the smell was bad.
Criminals, robbers, perverts . .were all pale
All seemed tired or miserable or sad.
……………………………………………………………….
I used to look into your dreamy eyes,
Look at the sky to see the shinning moon,
To see radiant stars, in large or small size.
Thence I wondered, “ Can I see your eyes soon?”
……………………………………………………………….
Your phantom’s coming to me every time,
Stand by me, I wished to hug ‘t tightly.
On the walls of the jail, I carved my rhyme,
By that dim lamp, I could see it slightly.
……………………………………………………………….
Drops of my blood flowed on the jail’s ground.
A needle incised your name on my tired chest.
I had shouted at the top of my sound,
“ Like you, where can I find? In east or west?
……………………………………………………………….
On the walls, there is a motto “ Oh brother . .
Read my kind advice! To you I’m loyal . .
No doubt, every flower will soon wither
But the sweet memory will stay immortal.
Have nice time
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
hi
frankly i do not know wht to write it's like a story i read it and imagen it sametime imagen how passion and love help heroin the poem to pass time and not to forget her
ur great man
frankly i do not know wht to write it's like a story i read it and imagen it sametime imagen how passion and love help heroin the poem to pass time and not to forget her
ur great man
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hello
ok u r the first to comment my poem and i think did not like it much koz u didn't appreciate it, u didn't say if its good or bad . but as u said it is like story , indeed its a story happened inside a jail. a story of one loves and dreams to meet his sweetheart again.
thnx 4 ur comment
gd lk
ok u r the first to comment my poem and i think did not like it much koz u didn't appreciate it, u didn't say if its good or bad . but as u said it is like story , indeed its a story happened inside a jail. a story of one loves and dreams to meet his sweetheart again.
thnx 4 ur comment
gd lk
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shakespear wrote:Ode from inside a jail
How could I live in that miserable jail?
Bad food, bad drink and even the smell was bad.
Criminals, robbers, perverts . .were all pale
All seemed tired or miserable or sad.
……………………………………………………………….
I used to look into your dreamy eyes,
Look at the sky to see the shinning moon,
To see radiant stars, in large or small size.
Thence I wondered, “ Can I see your eyes soon?” ……………………………………………………………….
Your phantom’s coming to me every time,
Stand by me, I wished to hug ‘t tightly.
On the walls of the jail, I carved my rhyme,
By that dim lamp, I could see it slightly.
……………………………………………………………….
Drops of my blood flowed on the jail’s ground.
A needle incised your name on my tired chest.
I had shouted at the top of my sound,
“ Like you, where can I find? In east or west?
……………………………………………………………….
On the walls, there is a motto “ Oh brother . .
Read my kind advice! To you I’m loyal . .
No doubt, every flower will soon wither
But the sweet memory will stay immortal.
Have nice time
YOU ARE FANTASTIC
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my dear freindshakespear wrote:hello
ok u r the first to comment my poem and i think did not like it much koz u didn't appreciate it, u didn't say if its good or bad . but as u said it is like story , indeed its a story happened inside a jail. a story of one loves and dreams to meet his sweetheart again.
thnx 4 ur comment
gd lk
i did not say it's bad one i like it
i still loosing my talent i do not know wht's up if u ave any advices plz send some
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oh my god!!! did you write this?
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i am an English literature graduate. yet, i thought this poem belongs to Shakespeare. plz mention your real name here. its a crime for a person like you to be nameless. i want to put it on my Facebook page, so i wouldn't put it without your name.
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Nice poem, i liked it, sorry i'm busy these days! u are nice poetman! kisses
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thanks 4 those who show comments
any one wants to write it on facebook its ok
my name is darkstar
thnx again 4 ur comments
gd lk
c u
any one wants to write it on facebook its ok
my name is darkstar
thnx again 4 ur comments
gd lk
c u
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Hi
I didn't see this poem on facebook yet. Please tell me when you put it in facebook.
I didn't see this poem on facebook yet. Please tell me when you put it in facebook.
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hello
i do'nt know when he'll put it on fb
u can ask him
his name is msaabneh
c u
i do'nt know when he'll put it on fb
u can ask him
his name is msaabneh
c u
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NICE FLOW. YOU ARE REALLY GOOD.
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thanks fanuun
i'd like to hear comment and i wish u pick up mistakes from my poem that i think u will give me expensive gift.
thnx again and accept my regards
c u and gd lk
i'd like to hear comment and i wish u pick up mistakes from my poem that i think u will give me expensive gift.
thnx again and accept my regards
c u and gd lk
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hi
I miss you all
Any new poem?
see you
I miss you all
Any new poem?
see you
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hello
really no new poems yet
may be in next few days, i don't know ...
poet needs inspiration
thnx 4 ur comment
c u
really no new poems yet
may be in next few days, i don't know ...
poet needs inspiration
thnx 4 ur comment
c u
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Hi
I shall send you my picture to give you inspiration please write a poem on me
Thanks
Best wishes
I shall send you my picture to give you inspiration please write a poem on me
Thanks
Best wishes
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inspiration isn't given by photos only it's given by chatting and feelings
now u know that? i hope u got it
any way i'll be glad to get ur photo, it's my pleasure to c ur face and figure....
c u
now u know that? i hope u got it
any way i'll be glad to get ur photo, it's my pleasure to c ur face and figure....
c u
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Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye
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Really a heart touching poem friend. Noticing the word jail i first hesitated to read this poem. but now i feel happy that I read this. Superb!!!!!
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hello
thnx ur words really encourage persons to write more and more
thnx again
plz make me favor and always show me ur comments
c u and have lovely moments
thnx ur words really encourage persons to write more and more
thnx again
plz make me favor and always show me ur comments
c u and have lovely moments
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hello
this poem reminds me the days in the jail, although they were hateful days but they will stay in mind and won't disappear and i can't forget them. there is always sth which reminds u that.
i wanna just express my feelings.
forgive me
this poem reminds me the days in the jail, although they were hateful days but they will stay in mind and won't disappear and i can't forget them. there is always sth which reminds u that.
i wanna just express my feelings.
forgive me
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
REALLY U WAS IN THE JAIL
OHHHHHHH
U WAS SUFFERING IF U WAS IN THE JAIL
OHHHHHHH
U WAS SUFFERING IF U WAS IN THE JAIL
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
yes i was in it and i suffered from that and i'm still suffering
god save me and all my friends
god save me and all my friends
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
woooooooooo,
i thought i read all of ur poems,but i missed this,
how great u r,u convey me in a moment from world to another,thanx.
i thought i read all of ur poems,but i missed this,
how great u r,u convey me in a moment from world to another,thanx.
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hello
u r welcome and i thnx u 4 these comments , u seem so kind and soft. really i wish u read all my poems and send me ur point of view about my writings. we all learn and learn and one can't stop learing koz that refers to stopping the life and means death....
plz read and send me ur comments
c u
u r welcome and i thnx u 4 these comments , u seem so kind and soft. really i wish u read all my poems and send me ur point of view about my writings. we all learn and learn and one can't stop learing koz that refers to stopping the life and means death....
plz read and send me ur comments
c u
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u r welcome,
there is a saying that "the great person is great untill s/he thinks s/he is great",
one has to learn to the last moment of his/her life,u r right,thnx
there is a saying that "the great person is great untill s/he thinks s/he is great",
one has to learn to the last moment of his/her life,u r right,thnx
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hello
yes u r the person is so great unless that person claims the knowledge, in that moment s/he becomes ignorant and no more educated, koz s/he will stop searching and learning.
really i thought u r so educated and i invite u to try writing poems or short storied koz i think u can
thnx and hope lovely times
yes u r the person is so great unless that person claims the knowledge, in that moment s/he becomes ignorant and no more educated, koz s/he will stop searching and learning.
really i thought u r so educated and i invite u to try writing poems or short storied koz i think u can
thnx and hope lovely times
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u get the idea,
i thank ur invitation very much ,in fact u r motivating me,thanx.
i like writing poems and stories,but it depends on my mood
i will try to have something new very soon ,and u of course will be the supervisor of me
thanx again for regarding me as an educated person,it means a lot for me,that shakespear says so.
i thank ur invitation very much ,in fact u r motivating me,thanx.
i like writing poems and stories,but it depends on my mood
i will try to have something new very soon ,and u of course will be the supervisor of me
thanx again for regarding me as an educated person,it means a lot for me,that shakespear says so.
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u r welcome and i'll be so happy to be ur helper in writing sth, just start any thing and u'll find urself making something great ...u'll find ur self making great work and u'll be proud of that..i'm sure u can but first put the idea infront of ur face and hold the pen and write what is inside ur deeps then ur pen won't stop .......thnx, u inspired me 2 say these lovely words and advices..
good luck
good luck
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hi,
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
have nice moments.
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
have nice moments.
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hello
i tried to write but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
thnx and have lovely times
i tried to write but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
thnx and have lovely times
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
Hellooooooooo
i read this comment in your new subject with some changs but i think it is good
good luck
i read this comment in your new subject with some changs but i think it is good
good luck
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hello
yes that's right i issued it in separate topic.thnx 4 this soft comment and have nice moments
yes that's right i issued it in separate topic.thnx 4 this soft comment and have nice moments
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HELLO
I WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING BUT I CANNOT PLEASE CAN U HELP ME IN WTITING A POEM?
MY REGARDS AND PLEASE READ MY LETTER IN YOUR BOX IN ENGLISH CLUB AND ANSWER ME.
THANKS
I WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING BUT I CANNOT PLEASE CAN U HELP ME IN WTITING A POEM?
MY REGARDS AND PLEASE READ MY LETTER IN YOUR BOX IN ENGLISH CLUB AND ANSWER ME.
THANKS
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hi
listen
poems can't be written by friends and by helping one another, i know one can help another by encoruging but to teach him how to write a poem , really i don't know
have nice moments
listen
poems can't be written by friends and by helping one another, i know one can help another by encoruging but to teach him how to write a poem , really i don't know
have nice moments
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
Hmm.. My comment for now, it's so good and touch my heart..
You know, I feel that I'm in that jail..
Imagine for what I will do..
So far with someone I love..
So sad..
You know, I feel that I'm in that jail..
Imagine for what I will do..
So far with someone I love..
So sad..
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hello
thnx .......
really u encouraged me with these lovley words and i hope u send more comments about other poems.......
u seem so good in this comment and i hope u try to write poems or any literatur writing
c u
my best wishes
thnx .......
really u encouraged me with these lovley words and i hope u send more comments about other poems.......
u seem so good in this comment and i hope u try to write poems or any literatur writing
c u
my best wishes
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hi :) Shakespear, i already told u i loved this poem. I hope you do not miss this great gift that you have to write poems, and God continue giving you lots of inspiration. Bye
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hi lara and thnx
so am i
hope not to lose this gift of God...pray 4 me to get inspiration
thanx again
so am i
hope not to lose this gift of God...pray 4 me to get inspiration
thanx again
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
hi all my friends....some thing reminds me this poem...really i like it much....koz its part of my personality...
have lovely time...
c u
have lovely time...
c u
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
Have you been in a jail?
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hi elisa...yeah i entered the jail for about 11 months then i was released , but after that i felt the jail come inside me.....i think u got the meaning....i meant i'm scared now and i fear my shadow...
any way..its now just memory...
any way..its now just memory...
our life is like a night mare
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I am so sorry for you. Fear is a bad beast!
Ciao.
Ciao.
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thnx 4 ur soft feelings...really i used to fear every thing ...in the street, in the flat, in the scholl, even the bed...its frightful ...some times i awake from sleep and turn my pillow to discover there's nothing...it's tragedy....
where are all my loyal friends...the place seem empty...
why did that happened to this club??
have nice moments
where are all my loyal friends...the place seem empty...
why did that happened to this club??
have nice moments
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
Rich people use psychotherapy, other people use religion...I prefer a bar of good chocolate :)
But ..tell me...What do you think there could be under the pillow?
But ..tell me...What do you think there could be under the pillow?
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hi again/
as u said everyone uses sth different to cure self...may b one of us wana escape to uncertain place just to forget the problem....some use religion to dive in worshipping and adoration, to get patience for facing that problem...for me i preter the last one...i mean worshipping...
in that time, i just had got out from my nightmare and i dont know now why i refuged that time to the place under my pillow....may be i was afraid of sth..a bomb or snake or a ghost or some thing else....may be i wanted to become armed against any probable danger so i turned my pollow looking for a gun or a knife or any weapon perhaps i might find there....
these are my thoughts ...may be i'm wrong and i've 2 face my problems once and twice..more and more....till i used to live peacefully....
any way thanks 4 ur interest and hope u nice time....
have nice moments u and all my friends...
good luck
as u said everyone uses sth different to cure self...may b one of us wana escape to uncertain place just to forget the problem....some use religion to dive in worshipping and adoration, to get patience for facing that problem...for me i preter the last one...i mean worshipping...
in that time, i just had got out from my nightmare and i dont know now why i refuged that time to the place under my pillow....may be i was afraid of sth..a bomb or snake or a ghost or some thing else....may be i wanted to become armed against any probable danger so i turned my pollow looking for a gun or a knife or any weapon perhaps i might find there....
these are my thoughts ...may be i'm wrong and i've 2 face my problems once and twice..more and more....till i used to live peacefully....
any way thanks 4 ur interest and hope u nice time....
have nice moments u and all my friends...
good luck
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
I am sorry, you seem so sad.
How can I help you... maybe telling you that under your pillow you can find only your pyjama or some money that the tooth fairy left for you... but probably this cannot cheer you up.
I wish you all the best, ciao.
How can I help you... maybe telling you that under your pillow you can find only your pyjama or some money that the tooth fairy left for you... but probably this cannot cheer you up.
I wish you all the best, ciao.
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
hahahahah.......thnx ...really u seem so funny...ok real friend who wants to give happines to his/her friends
at least u could make me laugh..
thnx again
at least u could make me laugh..
thnx again
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Ode from inside a jail
ode from inside a jail....i like this poem...and some other poems i wrote b4
our life is like a night mare