Hi Golden Moon ( Full Moon)
I wish to break you and
make golden ornaments
for my sister..
Hi all small stars...
I wish to break all of you
and make diamond ornaments
for my sister....
I am seeing, there is a female doll
inside a textile shop
It is wearing a saree (Indian Traditional Female Dress)
So, I wish to buy for you ( My sister)
but there is no money in my pocket
tears are coming out from my eyes
still I am standing outside of the shop
with sad feelings......
I will live as her eyes
then i will make safest life for her
And I will in starvation to save some money
for her marriage
Her Marriage music must hear at the earliest
How is it?
Murugan
A Poor Brother feelings
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
it really good that u have such feelings to ur sister i'm sure that she excused & forgive u just try to be in touch with here
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
EN + O
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
Dear God
If it is really good, why the other members did not appreciate? except my sister.
muru - gun
If it is really good, why the other members did not appreciate? except my sister.
muru - gun
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
hi u should not be upset so much look how many views u had 116 that's amazing number :)
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
Dear God
My sister convinced me as below
hi u should not be upset so much look how many views u had 116 that's amazing number :)
I am really glad, but According to me, My sister understood my feelings and she likes too my lines
Although She likes, everybody should know, the elder brother's feelings, how he is loving as a brother, on his only sister and how he has huge response for her as a elder brother.That is my wish.
Muru- Gun
My sister convinced me as below
hi u should not be upset so much look how many views u had 116 that's amazing number :)
I am really glad, but According to me, My sister understood my feelings and she likes too my lines
Although She likes, everybody should know, the elder brother's feelings, how he is loving as a brother, on his only sister and how he has huge response for her as a elder brother.That is my wish.
Muru- Gun
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
nice speech :)
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
Dear God
please ask her and tell me which line or lines she likes too
Muru- Gun
please ask her and tell me which line or lines she likes too
Muru- Gun
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
"I will live as her eyes"
"i Golden Moon ( Full Moon)
I wish to break you and
make golden ornaments
for my sister..
Hi all small stars...
I wish to break all of you
and make diamond ornaments
for my sister...."
"i Golden Moon ( Full Moon)
I wish to break you and
make golden ornaments
for my sister..
Hi all small stars...
I wish to break all of you
and make diamond ornaments
for my sister...."
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
Thanks
Dear God
Do you know, is my sister working? and is she responsible girl to her family?
why am I asking you? I can't see her as before easily.
Now her replying time is changed
Thus, I ask you.
Please investigate and tell me
muru-gun
Dear God
Do you know, is my sister working? and is she responsible girl to her family?
why am I asking you? I can't see her as before easily.
Now her replying time is changed
Thus, I ask you.
Please investigate and tell me
muru-gun
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
just read the message
takecare
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
I am seeing, there is a female doll
the verb "see" from the sensation verbs so it doesn't come in continuous present tense and instead of that it occures in simple present
the verb "see" from the sensation verbs so it doesn't come in continuous present tense and instead of that it occures in simple present
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
Dear Shakes
This is great time I had you know
Because you respond to my odd
I considered already you do not know, you are the great in this forum and in this club.
So, I am in pleasure and to my eyes, this mistakes is not a important.
Why?
You responded.
That's enough to me
Where are your other friends?
tell them to come here
Please forgive me if already I wounded your heart
Muru-Gun
This is great time I had you know
Because you respond to my odd
I considered already you do not know, you are the great in this forum and in this club.
So, I am in pleasure and to my eyes, this mistakes is not a important.
Why?
You responded.
That's enough to me
Where are your other friends?
tell them to come here
Please forgive me if already I wounded your heart
Muru-Gun
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
dear friend
u r welcome and don't mention plz ...we have to forget the past and throw it behind us and not to look at it again...
thnx 4 ur kind words
have good luck
u r welcome and don't mention plz ...we have to forget the past and throw it behind us and not to look at it again...
thnx 4 ur kind words
have good luck
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings
i'm glade to hear that past is past between you :) :)