Hello,
I'm starting to write a song for own purpose. Please correct my sentence structure. I'm not sure if it's right or not, since English isn't the main language in my country.
"There's something about you I can't pretend
Makes me want you so bad more than just be friends
Tell me what do I say just to make you stay"
I'm not sure about the bold ones or maybe the whole sentece.
Thanks in advance.
Sentence structure
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Re: Sentence structure
Try this...
There's something about you I can't pretend
Makes me want you so bad more than just friends
Tell me what do I say just to make you stay
You could also try...
Tell me what can I say to just make you stay
or...
There's something about you I just can't pretend
Makes me want you so bad more than just friends
Tell me what can I say to just make you stay
There's something about you I can't pretend
Makes me want you so bad more than just friends
Tell me what do I say just to make you stay
You could also try...
Tell me what can I say to just make you stay
or...
There's something about you I just can't pretend
Makes me want you so bad more than just friends
Tell me what can I say to just make you stay
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