can you review my writing ?

[zaherS]

Hi every one
At first thank you all for this site ❤❤
I'm learning english by self-studying , and when I'm writing I need some one to correct my writing , till now I don't know how many mistakes I've alreasy made in this post ..

I have written this words below and I need to know what do you think about it , from grammer , vocabulary and every thing ❤

(( We grow up every day , getting older day by day, our thinking changes , experiences increase and our imagination expands , but our promises still as they are , deep in our heart , till we can make that dreams we made .. real ))

what do you think ?

[Mohsen]

Hi Zaher,

Your writing is defectless.
Hope your dreams comes true.

Mohsen

[zaherS]

Hi Zaher,

Your writing is defectless.
Hope your dreams comes true.

Mohsen

Thank you Mr. Mohsen :)
I hope that

[Jenniferh]

Your writing is beautiful! I would only make a couple changes:


We grow up every day , getting older day by day, our thinking changes , experiences increase, and our imagination expands , but our promises are still as they were, deep in our hearts , till we can make those dreams we made .. real


I hope your dreams come true!

[zaherS]

Your writing is beautiful! I would only make a couple changes:


We grow up every day , getting older day by day, our thinking changes , experiences increase, and our imagination expands , but our promises are still as they were, deep in our hearts , till we can make those dreams we made .. real


I hope your dreams come true!

Wow .. it's awesome after your "couple of changes" :D
thank you so much :)
>>>
but I need another help, please ! what is correct to say ?
" I hope that (to)or(for) your dreams too " ??

[Jenniferh]

Can you give me the context? Are you wishing the same to someone else for their dreams?

I would simply say:

I wish the same for your dreams, too!

[zaherS]

I would simply say:

I wish the same for your dreams, too!

That's what I'm looking for
The solution is always simple but l make it complex =_=
Thank you again
And I wish the same for your dreams , too! "to become true" ^__________^

[Jenniferh]

[Jenniferh]

You are very welcome!

[DrNorman]

Dear Zaher,
I love your sentiments. Well done with your writing. I am very impressed with your application to self-study.
Here are some useful tips to help you edit your own posts and emails.
1. Check that you have agreement. For instance, " this words" should be "these words".
2. Try to avoid what we call sentence run-ons. This is where you separate sentences with a comma, rather than using a full stop at the end of each sentence.
I hope you find this useful!
Best wishes with your English,
Dr Norman

[zaherS]

Dear Zaher,
I love your sentiments. Well done with your writing. I am very impressed with your application to self-study.
Here are some useful tips to help you edit your own posts and emails.
1. Check that you have agreement. For instance, " this words" should be "these words".
2. Try to avoid what we call sentence run-ons. This is where you separate sentences with a comma, rather than using a full stop at the end of each sentence.
I hope you find this useful!
Best wishes with your English,
Dr Norman

Thank you Dr Norman for your tips , I will take them into consideration. :)
I really appreciate your help. ❤