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Write Your Name

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I wrote your name on a paper.
When I was still children
Just starting to learn how to spell
Again and again
Till the paper was full of your names

I wrote your name on the desk
When I was having a lesson at middle school
Turning aside absently
Over and over
Till the teacher picked me up

I wrote your name in the letters to you
When I was studiying in university
Neglecting many staring eyes from girls
Repeatedly and repeatedly
Till the dawn began

I type you name On the display
When I am not together with now
Missing you from the bottom of my heart
Now and then
Till the email comes from you
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So sweet!!!
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it was not until I read the poem that I had never known Poloo is a love master :lol:
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hey poloo! :wink: i just wanna ask.. are you poLoo, the mint with the hole?! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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francine wrote:hey poloo! :wink: i just wanna ask.. are you poLoo, the mint with the hole?! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Hello Francine, I am Poloo, but I don't what a mint with the hole means, could explain it in detail?
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PoLoo wrote:
francine wrote:hey poloo! :wink: i just wanna ask.. are you poLoo, the mint with the hole?! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Hello Francine, I am Poloo, but I don't what a mint with the hole means, could explain it in detail?
that's a candy. it has a commercial which says. "polo, the mint with a hole". :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Thanks to Francine!
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RedRose wrote:it was not until I read the poem that I had never known Poloo is a love master :lol:
Thanks to redrose.
I want to be a love master but having loved only one person---my wife now----prevents me from achieving my goal.
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Dixie wrote:So sweet!!!
Thanks to Dixie.
You arel always lovely.
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:oops: :oops: Nah, you are! ;)
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PoLoo wrote:Thanks to Francine!
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PoLoo wrote: Thanks to redrose.
I want to be a love master but having loved only one person---my wife now----prevents me from achieving my goal.
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Poloo, it is a nice poem really. I admire you as well. ;)

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