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True Fire
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by True Fire » Sat Nov 13, 2004 6:49 am
I wrote your name on a paper.
When I was still children
Just starting to learn how to spell
Again and again
Till the paper was full of your names
I wrote your name on the desk
When I was having a lesson at middle school
Turning aside absently
Over and over
Till the teacher picked me up
I wrote your name in the letters to you
When I was studiying in university
Neglecting many staring eyes from girls
Repeatedly and repeatedly
Till the dawn began
I type you name On the display
When I am not together with now
Missing you from the bottom of my heart
Now and then
Till the email comes from you
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Dixie
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by Dixie » Sat Nov 13, 2004 7:46 pm
So sweet!!!
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by RedRose » Sun Nov 14, 2004 5:43 am
it was not until I read the poem that I had never known Poloo is a love master
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by francine » Sun Nov 14, 2004 7:36 pm
True Fire
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by True Fire » Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:07 pm
Hello Francine, I am Poloo, but I don't what a mint with the hole means, could explain it in detail?
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by francine » Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:13 pm
True Fire
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by True Fire » Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:26 pm
Thanks to Francine!
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True Fire
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by True Fire » Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:50 pm
RedRose wrote: it was not until I read the poem that I had never known Poloo is a love master
Thanks to redrose.
I want to be a love master but having loved only one person---my wife now----prevents me from achieving my goal.
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True Fire
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by True Fire » Sun Nov 14, 2004 9:52 pm
Dixie wrote: So sweet!!!
Thanks to Dixie.
You arel always lovely.
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by Dixie » Sun Nov 14, 2004 11:28 pm
Nah, you are! ;)
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by francine » Mon Nov 15, 2004 1:09 am
PoLoo wrote: Thanks to Francine!
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by francine » Mon Nov 15, 2004 1:10 am
_Arale_
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by _Arale_ » Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:00 pm
Poloo, it is a nice poem really. I admire you as well. ;)
_Arale_