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greatJim
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forgive me,my love,i can not live with you
i don't know why,maybe someday,when I am back.
---Although everyday i think of you,want to say "i love you "in my heart.but i just leave it in the imagination....

SO,
I AM A DREAMER----------I had spent all my strength to love you.--
But ,I am a dreamer..... :cry: :cry: :cry:
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really sad?Why didn't you try to live with her with your love?Another chance?Another dream?
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greatJim wrote:forgive me,my love,i can not live with you
i don't know why,maybe someday,when I am back.
---Although everyday i think of you,want to say "i love you "in my heart.but i just leave it in the imagination....

SO,
I AM A DREAMER----------I had spent all my strength to love you.--
But ,I am a dreamer..... :cry: :cry: :cry:
:? :? :? :? Is this a joke?! What kind os dreamer are you?! That is not a dream, this is torture!!!
You should write a book about it, it seems romantic...
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