SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .
THANKS ALOT
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our life is like a night mare
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Good..... :)
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it's nice
you are written very effective poem I like it
you are written very effective poem I like it
As you sew, so shall you reap
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Thanks a lot to everyone who encourages me and good luck ,
our life is like a night mare
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Hi . Our life is short,so why we don`t enjoy our selves.
our life is like a night mare
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hi you are a good writer and i encourage you to continue writing and i am waiting for you next poem
good luck :P
good luck :P
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thank u
EliasJ
u really engourage me
good luck
EliasJ
u really engourage me
good luck
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hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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hi
every one always needs to be encouraged, don`t u think?
c u soon good luck
bye
every one always needs to be encouraged, don`t u think?
c u soon good luck
bye
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speaking frankly
i think its rather artificial ,unnatural.
sorry but its my point of view.
i think its rather artificial ,unnatural.
sorry but its my point of view.
we have to live our life freely
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hello and thnx
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i remember the time of writing.....and the situationshakespear wrote:SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .
our life is like a night mare