All the world is a stage
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- shakespear
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Re: All the world is a stage
thnx a lot..u2..really i wish u keep contact with me koz u seem so kind...always have nice moments...i d k wt happened to me koz i'm not able to write poems...i feel i have sth inside...my soul wants to expel poet...but i can't say it
our life is like a night mare
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Re: All the world is a stage
I wrote just a Rhyme to laugh!
I know you are a teacher of rhymes.
Maybe my poor poem can give you the start for the best and famous poem of your life
Shakespeare or Neruda will be nobody in comparison with you
JUST A RHYME
“Are you a friend of mine?”
I ask to a crocodile
“When you are on my frontline
Must I run for a mile?
Laughing or crying is the same to you
And the true is a point of view!
Are you a friend of mine?
Tell me dear crocodile”
I know you are a teacher of rhymes.
Maybe my poor poem can give you the start for the best and famous poem of your life
Shakespeare or Neruda will be nobody in comparison with you
JUST A RHYME
“Are you a friend of mine?”
I ask to a crocodile
“When you are on my frontline
Must I run for a mile?
Laughing or crying is the same to you
And the true is a point of view!
Are you a friend of mine?
Tell me dear crocodile”
- shakespear
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Re: All the world is a stage
hi ...i think u start good rhyme and i made some modifications..i hope u don't mind...but i think u have ability to write poems if u try it hard....thnx 4 every thing...best wishes....plz read my modifications:
“When you are on my frontline
i imagine you'll be mine
so i run, to get you,for a mile
and my lips will just show a smile
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Laughing or crying for me, is the same
every thing in this world is mere fame
without meanings, so what is the name?
your love turned me lame
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are you a lover, love to me, send?
or an enemy or a loyal friend?
or a bad omen came from the hell
or a soft balm will make me well?
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are you a deer or a crocodile?
can i trust your tears for a while??
we all will be kicked outside
so tell me please the truth don't hide
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“When you are on my frontline
i imagine you'll be mine
so i run, to get you,for a mile
and my lips will just show a smile
-------
Laughing or crying for me, is the same
every thing in this world is mere fame
without meanings, so what is the name?
your love turned me lame
-----
are you a lover, love to me, send?
or an enemy or a loyal friend?
or a bad omen came from the hell
or a soft balm will make me well?
--------
are you a deer or a crocodile?
can i trust your tears for a while??
we all will be kicked outside
so tell me please the truth don't hide
----......
our life is like a night mare
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Re: All the world is a stage
Thanks for your modifications. You are great
I’ve tried to go on. I know I have to practice a lot, anyway it is really funny.
It’s very useful to learn and remember new words, too.
Best wishes, thanks to read it.
"Loyal friend you can me call
but don’t hang me on the wall
in your mind you can me find
and a smile always remind
In the mountains I run and stay
But I dream to fly to the UK
Writing poems for you my dear
is not easy without a beer
Feel you free to love or hate
every person near your gate
If someone will kick us outside
under a cushion we will hide
This stupid poem I am stopping now
Have a good day and a sweet CIAO!
I’ve tried to go on. I know I have to practice a lot, anyway it is really funny.
It’s very useful to learn and remember new words, too.
Best wishes, thanks to read it.
"Loyal friend you can me call
but don’t hang me on the wall
in your mind you can me find
and a smile always remind
In the mountains I run and stay
But I dream to fly to the UK
Writing poems for you my dear
is not easy without a beer
Feel you free to love or hate
every person near your gate
If someone will kick us outside
under a cushion we will hide
This stupid poem I am stopping now
Have a good day and a sweet CIAO!
- shakespear
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Re: All the world is a stage
hi
congratulations..
at last u put ur foot on the poetry's way....and i say to u...
it's so lovely to say that
with me, you try so lovely chat
from you i read sweet rhyme
and spend so happy time
you easily get the right way
so we can meet and play
at last you have sweet day
congratulations..
at last u put ur foot on the poetry's way....and i say to u...
it's so lovely to say that
with me, you try so lovely chat
from you i read sweet rhyme
and spend so happy time
you easily get the right way
so we can meet and play
at last you have sweet day
our life is like a night mare
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Re: All the world is a stage
This is for a friend who has a strange opinion of European people.
Every human we can say
Find obstacles on his way
Strong and positive we stay
bad thoughts we blew away
Working hard and correct behave
Now we are in a safety cave
Our feelings are precious things
they are not for bad kings.
English language and conversation
That’s the why of participation
If it is not the same for you
I will try with the voodoo
Every human we can say
Find obstacles on his way
Strong and positive we stay
bad thoughts we blew away
Working hard and correct behave
Now we are in a safety cave
Our feelings are precious things
they are not for bad kings.
English language and conversation
That’s the why of participation
If it is not the same for you
I will try with the voodoo
- shakespear
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Re: All the world is a stage
waw....u r a great poetess now...i think u r better than me....
best wishes
best wishes
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Re: All the world is a stage
Thanks for compliments.
Have a nice day. Ciao!
Have a nice day. Ciao!
- shakespear
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Re: All the world is a stage
ciao...
how r u???
show me another rhyme....don't stop....move ahead....
c u
how r u???
show me another rhyme....don't stop....move ahead....
c u
our life is like a night mare