do you see something uncorrect or foreign in my text?

Len · Post by **Len** » Mon Feb 09, 2009 4:27 pm

When I looked at the character, an impatient Gen Yer thinking about new models of advertising, I thought: is it really that much about generation Y? I mean, didn’t we all have “great expectations”, as one of the experts puts it (by the way, the term comes from a good old XIX century novel of Charles Dickens “Great expectations”), rushing in a hurry to see our ideas implemented for Company’s sake?

thank you for any suggestions how to make it better

Josef Essberger · Post by **Josef Essberger** » Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:21 pm

The first thing I saw was that uncorrect should be incorrect.

Len · Post by **Len** » Thu Feb 12, 2009 3:26 pm

Thank you!! Was it the first and ONLY thing?

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do you see something uncorrect or foreign in my text?

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