I want to correct the below sentence. Below sentence is taken from a letter of request for a loan where there is a list of expenses in the letter asking to refund the cost.
Sentence to be corrected is as follows.
"I have already purchased one set of study materials for USD 100 using my credit card which is not included in the above list."
Usage "Which" & sentence Grammer correction
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Re: Usage "Which" & sentence Grammer correction
Clearer would be:
"I have already purchased one set of study materials for USD 100 using my credit card. This transaction is not included in the above list."
"I have already purchased one set of study materials for USD 100 using my credit card. This transaction is not included in the above list."