Photography has its roots in the form of art. I devoted half my life promoting this art of photography which emanates beauty, simplicity and style.
1. Should there be a comma after “photography”?
2. Can the sentence be improved?
Thanks!
Should there be a comma after "photography"?
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Re: Should there be a comma after "photography"?
It makes better sense with the comma.