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Lee
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by Lee » Sat Aug 28, 2004 10:58 pm
My lovely flower
Grow stron and deepy inside my heart
and never leaves me
and here's another one
hold on to my heart
i ask you not to break it
and i will hold yours
so what do you think of these.
hope4422
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by hope4422 » Wed Sep 29, 2004 6:52 am
nice
but I do not understand it
hope is life
mandy
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by mandy » Wed Sep 29, 2004 9:25 pm
so simple.......so nice..
i loved it..
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
pooh_bear
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by pooh_bear » Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:32 pm
thanks lee for that..nice one try to post some more..
Dixie
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by Dixie » Thu Sep 30, 2004 11:50 pm
I wonder what the meaning of flower is in the poem.
pooh_bear
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by pooh_bear » Fri Oct 01, 2004 2:07 pm
i think his love one...