Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short )
Shokin
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
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Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
either you cry or laugh not both
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Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
my friend shokin i like this short poems and i think i can make it long but its urs and i dont wana trespass ur poemsshokin wrote:Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short )
Shokin
..... congratulations
go ahead and do like this but try to make it long i think u have the talent
thnx