Her thin hair tinned with fair
Theirs are coloured multiple
Having long top she always wear
Their dress is half way short
Dandy garments she make sure
Lousy clothes are they favour
Covered whole bottom she do care
Their fashion is panty shown
An old woman who is peer
Young fellows she can't bare
Old & Young
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Re: Old & Young
I like it. Great!yali wrote:Her thin hair tinned with fair
Theirs are coloured multiple
Having long top she always wear
Their dress is half way short
Dandy garments she make sure
Lousy clothes are they favour
Covered whole bottom she do care
Their fashion is panty shown
An old woman who is peer
Young fellows she can't bare
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Re: Old & Young
Yeah, nice message, good rhyme..
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Re: Old & Young
I have no commands..... :D :D :D :D
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Re: Old & Young
"Covered whole bottom she do care
Their fashion is panty shown "
IT`S GOOD SIMILE . GOOD LUCK AND THANKS .
Their fashion is panty shown "
IT`S GOOD SIMILE . GOOD LUCK AND THANKS .
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Old & Young
This is great ,honestly ! I like it
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