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crocodile Tears
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
our life is like a night mare
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Re: poem
denvinbo ,MY FRIEND ,WHY DO YOU SAY THAT ? AREN`T YOU USED TO READ LIKE THIS ? BE OVER THIS LEVEL ; THNKS A LOT.
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Re: poem
hi my friends I want to thank you and hope to meet in future . Bye
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Re: poem
shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
This poems are sad.
I admire people who can write effectively but just wondering do you feel what you write?
You've got a thread of poems here and they are all sad... Why?
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Re: poem
Denvinbo, a single word could possess a lot of different meanings, to plenty of people with different culture. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)
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Re: poem
krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
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Thanks Uncle B. I'll remember this for the rest of my life. :)bambang wrote:Not everything we feel should be revealed. :Dshakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
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Thank you all of you .Xkalibur my friend I want to thank you too and good luck .
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Re: poem
Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
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Re: poem
find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
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Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
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once kirisi said that.Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
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Re: poem
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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thanx 4 this sitelovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
have nice moments
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hi
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Re: poem
hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?
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Re: poem
crocodile Tears ....written by me
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly
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Re: poem
shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears
I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train
* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be
* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it
our life is like a night mare