too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice
first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love
too close ............................. so far
now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you
( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )
share me your imaginatoin
cheeeeeeeeeeeeers
AN ODE TO ????????????????
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hello
i think its gd poem and can`t guess whom this poem to .first i thought its for ur lover, but it looks like a riddle.
plz tell me whom to.
i`m waiting 4 the answer.
i think its gd poem and can`t guess whom this poem to .first i thought its for ur lover, but it looks like a riddle.
plz tell me whom to.
i`m waiting 4 the answer.
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oh shki ur here
well i can not tell who cuz. i don't see much replies is there no imaginatoin here or what
well i can not tell who cuz. i don't see much replies is there no imaginatoin here or what
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I'll guess for whom is that poem.sweets wrote:too far .......................so close this my feeling foward you
to have more or stop it's a diffecult choice
first let me smell you oh my god
then have a kiss form you oh lallalallala
and finally have you all too smoothy full of passion and love
too close ............................. so far
now everything is finnished you finnished i finished no omre of you no more of me till i have anther peice of you or expect more of you
( now can you guess this odde to whome ??????????????????????????????????? )
share me your imaginatoin
cheeeeeeeeeeeeers
I think you wrote that for "shakespear". Am I correct sweets?
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So then I have no idea.sweets wrote:NO YOU ARE NOT DEAR
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well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you
when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one
when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one
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hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate
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only one?sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you
when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one
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do you belive this but it deserve thisPsixochka wrote:hi
it is a good poem, but i am shocked that it is adressed to the piece of the chocolate
is it too muchKrisi wrote:only one?sweets wrote:well it seems no one could guess ok i'll tell you
when i wrote this odde i wrote to the last piece of chocalte iwas so sad so i did not wait for next day i went out at that night and have anther one
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nice words from a nice mind
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hi sweet
hi every one who can believe u flirt a piece of chocolate.
its a joke but the words seem to be good why did not u send it to and u can consider me as that piece of chocolate koz i and that piece r similar.
c u and gd luck 4 all
hi every one who can believe u flirt a piece of chocolate.
its a joke but the words seem to be good why did not u send it to and u can consider me as that piece of chocolate koz i and that piece r similar.
c u and gd luck 4 all
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hi
nice to see you again
as i said before it's for chocolate not for any one
nice to see you again
as i said before it's for chocolate not for any one
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hi sweet
nice to meet u again... i said why did not u send it to me and consider me as that candy, koz the word and the flirt is high and lovely and i wish to be that piece of choclate.
plz tell me what is ur news? i wanna know about u
i`m waiting 4 ur news.
c u soon
nice to meet u again... i said why did not u send it to me and consider me as that candy, koz the word and the flirt is high and lovely and i wish to be that piece of choclate.
plz tell me what is ur news? i wanna know about u
i`m waiting 4 ur news.
c u soon
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hi
well iam writing somethig about dancing iam sure you will like it
about me iam not ok too busy and lost (iam working since toady beside my study and so on) and really missing to talk with you
see you
well iam writing somethig about dancing iam sure you will like it
about me iam not ok too busy and lost (iam working since toady beside my study and so on) and really missing to talk with you
see you
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hi
i`m longing to c ur dacing poem
i hope u`ll be well at future
miss ur comments
c u
i`m longing to c ur dacing poem
i hope u`ll be well at future
miss ur comments
c u
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Hahahahha I don't want to do this with chocolates
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
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nice to see around
shakespear
i neec some help iam losing my inspiration i do not know what's going on with me
nice to see around
shakespear
i neec some help iam losing my inspiration i do not know what's going on with me
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