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illusion

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:20 pm

illusion

Your hair is the black night of the lovers
Your face is the shinning moon in that night
I sit silently , look at you for hours
Interested in you, in that sweet sight

Your eyes are green garden full of roses
Your rosy cheeks have two forbidden apples
Your lips are made of sweet red berries
Show me white pearls as they show smiles

You ‘re soft like the wings of a butterfly
You’re soft like the ray of the drowsy dawn
You’re soft like a blue sky in which I fly
You’re soft like a dew- drops of that fresh lawn

You are my eyes by which I see your charm
You’re my ears by which I hear a nice song
You’re my pleasure from God to forget your harm
You’re my heart beating fast, forgive your wrong

No food, no drink, no breath, but I need you
I can’t live without you, you are my life
I need you closely, who is like me, who?
You’ve hurt me, in my heart you’ve stabbed your knife

You’ve stolen my heart and let me alone
My queen, Have your slave! But give him a dose
Day and night, I always see you and moan
I’m afraid I lose my lovely red rose

I wrote this poem but you inspired me to write this poem so you gave me this favor. you remembered that these words had been mentioned in our chat, please accept my kisses habeeby.
good luck

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Re: illusion

Postby sweets » Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:36 pm

to my best freind

this time u wrote a charming lovely poem
and be sure u'll not that red rose

ur so senstive

this is
my frist comment wait for my deep omment

cu and well done

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Re: illusion

Postby RoseRed » Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:36 pm

Nice poem i liked so much u are great!

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Re: illusion

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:08 am

hola

well i read it agine but i did not find anything to talk about it's perfect and complete full of lovely senses and great emontions ur so great and glade to be freind to u

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:02 pm

thnx for all friends who comment on my poem and i'm very happy to have friends like u
good luck and i pray god help u and me.
thnx thnx thnx thnx
c u

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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:57 pm

Hi
I didnot remember these words so who u meant habeeby?
:-( :-( :-(

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 10:49 am

hello
its not 4u
c u later

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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:55 pm

Hello
Nice to be your friend
Best wishes :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:13 pm

its my pleasure
thnx
have nice moments and gd lk

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Re: illusion

Postby farah » Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:51 pm

Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:42 pm

hello
plz send me ur pic to describe u poetically and paint ur face
thnx
c u

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Re: illusion

Postby manar » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:52 pm

how nice it is but are there
men like this nowadays?in fact i dont think so?
in general,u r a great poet,and i really interest and feel each poem of u
keep it up

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:12 pm

thnx and i like to know u much my friend and hope we can meet much in future
have nice moments

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:54 pm

manar wrote:how nice it is but are there
men like this nowadays?in fact i dont think so?
in general,u r a great poet,and i really interest and feel each poem of u
keep it up

i think there r like those loyal men

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:32 am

hi

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Re: illusion

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:41 am

Good one :) Shakespear..u have had nice moments :D u are great

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:51 am

thnx friend
you too

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Re: illusion

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:42 am

hi my friends


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