how can i recast this sentence?
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how can i recast this sentence?
It's a pleasant sight to watch the burning sun bleed into the azure sea, under the gloaming sky.
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Re: how can i recast this sentence?
Let me try
A burning sun bleeding into the sea under the gloaming sky over the Cote d'azure was an enchanting sight.
A burning sun bleeding into the sea under the gloaming sky over the Cote d'azure was an enchanting sight.