Writing a review

[KromHD]

hi, im 17 and I'm still learning English. I wrote a review for hotel and I'm not sure if i wrote this hotel review correctly. Could you be so kind and tell me if I wrote something wrong.

I'm staying in this hotel with my family during the winter's holiday for 3 years. The room is always very clear and comfortable. The dinner and breakfast are very good and tasty. I would recommend it to you.

Thank you.

[Josef Essberger]

I've been staying in this hotel with my family during the winter holidays for the past 3 years. The room is always very bright and comfortable. The dinner and breakfast are very good and tasty. I would recommend it to you.

[KromHD]

thank you very much :)