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BonKither
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Does this sentence sound correct?

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Hi,

could you help me with the following sentence?


"I am absolutely excited and motivated about starting this process with your distinguished company. My wish is that, at the end of it, we could find ourselves to fulfil our reciprocal professional needs."

Does the part in italic sound ok to you? For some reason it does not to me.

Thanks
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Nope.....I would eliminate "find ourselves to" .
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justoneplay wrote: Sun Sep 30, 2018 9:22 pm Nope.....I would eliminate "find ourselves to" .
Agree :ok:
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