Please give your opinion and mark it out of 5

[Mr.Libyan]

My beloved Aunt,
Thanks for aking me to have some days with you in the countryside,tomorrow morning I'll be arrived at your home.
And I hope that the weather will be nice so I could go hiking and ride your horses while I'm there.
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon,
Love,
Mr.Libyan

[Mr.Libyan]

I'm still waiting for yur opinion

[John76]

My beloved Aunt,

Thanks for asking me to share some days with you in the countryside tomorrow morning. I'll be arriving at your home.
I hope the weather will be nice so I could go hiking and ride your horses while I'm there.
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!

Love,
Mr.Libyan

[Buddhaheart]

My beloved Aunt,
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Love,
Mr. (space required) Libyan